Iya Ythmir

Thank you very much for the critique. :wink: Although this is a stand alone piece, a short story if it could be placed in that category. I will proceed to ...

To answer your question, dear, yes, this one is much, much more realistic than the first. Macnair's use of the food tray suggests that simple human ingenuity can take anyone ...

:D Thank you very much GML, Dustfinger and Riababy for both the critiques and the praises (and the star :o ) I appreciate the time you've given for this little ...